First Page Critiques

Guest Post With Contest Winner Feedback! This week we have an awesome opportunity to see how judges critique first pages in contests. The critiques below…

What did you think? Do you agree with the critique? Would you keep reading? Tell us in the comments! Then send us your own manuscript!

What did you think? Do you agree with the critique? Would you keep reading? Tell us in comments! Then send us your own manuscript!

What did you think? Do you agree with the critique? Would you keep reading? Tell us in the comments! Then send us your own manuscript!

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